Comments on: In the Company of Angels: Episode 7.1 – The Attic https://jefmurray.com/framerunners/coa_episode/in-the-company-of-angels-episode-7-1-the-attic/ They're more than just paintings, you know.... Sun, 26 Jul 2015 00:00:03 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=4.2.4 By: Aleksandra https://jefmurray.com/framerunners/coa_episode/in-the-company-of-angels-episode-7-1-the-attic/#comment-63 Thu, 05 Mar 2015 16:28:21 +0000 https://jefmurray.com/framerunners/?p=492#comment-63 It is a really compelling story. I strongly look forward to reading another chapter. :)

]]> By: Debbie https://jefmurray.com/framerunners/coa_episode/in-the-company-of-angels-episode-7-1-the-attic/#comment-62 Mon, 02 Mar 2015 00:45:31 +0000 https://jefmurray.com/framerunners/?p=492#comment-62 Hi Jef,

Well, this is absolutely wonderful! And I can indeed see where you used the descriptions of The Kilns I provided:-). I simply love it! I think I should have a Kilns’ Friend Day and have all my friends who wish to see it come over while I’m there in the summer . . .

God bless,
Debbie
PS I still want to get a Reepicheep print from you–been a very busy quarter and I need a breather to catch up on these things!

]]> By: Jef Murray https://jefmurray.com/framerunners/coa_episode/in-the-company-of-angels-episode-7-1-the-attic/#comment-58 Fri, 27 Feb 2015 21:09:18 +0000 https://jefmurray.com/framerunners/?p=492#comment-58 Manuel,

Thanks for the comment! Jill recognizes the other person as a “he”, not because he was focusing inwardly, but because she thought in terms of “his” rather than “her” in the preceding sentence. The “So” is simply her recognition of that.

Jef

]]> By: Manuel https://jefmurray.com/framerunners/coa_episode/in-the-company-of-angels-episode-7-1-the-attic/#comment-57 Fri, 27 Feb 2015 19:54:48 +0000 https://jefmurray.com/framerunners/?p=492#comment-57 Just a question: you write “Someone concentrating his attention inwardly. “So it’s a ‘he’ rather than a ‘she’,” Jill thought.”
Do you mean that only men concentrate their attention inwardly, women never do that? If you don’t want to give that impression, I’d take the “So” out of the text.

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